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RE: AIR-CLINIC WRITING CONTEST : End of the World
I know I've been sick enough that I was hallucinating, but I've never had any body parts speak to me. From a story standpoint, though, hilarious and very entertaining.
I do have to say, though, I had a migraine headache a couple of times where, after the paralysis wore off, but the headache was still there, I thought my feet were just bones. Kind of freaky to think you're still alive but one of your feet is basically bare bones. Not even sure how I'd walk like that.
Thankfully, I'd generally fall asleep after that and wake up with my foot restored. :)
Coming from you that is such a compliment! I wanted to leave the reader with a WTF did I just read moment although hopefully in a good and funny way hahahaha.
Oh my maybe your Xray powers only manifests when you have a migraine headache and it only works on feet hahaha
Really awful time to have X-ray powers, but I can't argue with your assessment because that's the only time they've ever manifested. Thankfully. :)
I think you succeeded with your "What the what?!" moments. It's cool to have twists in a story, when they're appropriate, and I think you pulled it off.