Choose your own adventure: Clash of Whatever (The call)

in #adventure8 years ago (edited)

You are in your own home. Someone calls at the door. You go to the metallic door, and, like a human being, use your hand to rotate the lever and let the platform fall, for the guests to come in.
And yes, you have a castle. You spent so many gems at Clash of Whatever Shit They May Develop That You Buy It that they sent you some dwarves. The dwarves built you a castle and now they are unemployed. But that is not the question now.


Your castle.

You have a royal family as guests. You should show some education first. Your love is there. One of the royal family members is your sweetheart. Your love cannot be restrained by manners.
Would you kiss your sweet love in front of the queen?

Leave a comment with the answer to this question. I will continue the story replying to your answers. I left some ideas as comments too.

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You kiss your sweetheart, glancing erotically at the queen. Yes, you are in that sort of thing.

You look at the queen erotically. She is surprised to get such a noble attention from someone like you! She bites her lips, sweetly passing her tongue over them. Slowly, always paying attention to you as you kiss your sweet heart. She is the queen. Of darkness. She sends you a blinking Morse code with her eyes. You know what it means. It means The Dark Room.
Do you want to go to The Dark Room with her? She has nice cookies for you…and a black whip.

Hahaha, that's great... you write good and funny. I would do it this way though: Write a little more in each post. Then people vote and the comment with most votes is the starting point for the next post. That way everybody goes on the same journey to... dark rooms and such :)

Yeah, I had the same thoughts.

I was wondering if I was doing the right thing...xD

I should write a little more words, a story with a better structure and a clearer plot.

I'm not sure there is a right way. That is just the way I would do it. There are quite a few authors posting long and complicated novel on Steemit, and they do have success. It could be great fun to have a say in the way the story evolves. I would find a fitting word-count - not too long - not too short and try to go for that every post, and then end with a cliffhanger and some options in the comment.

You can see how Steemsports did it here with a big image in the comment saying, "RAPTORS WIN" so the comment isn't overlooked.

Yes, of course. Afterall, the queen knows. But do show the queen respect with the proper greeting and a bow. Though it is odd that the Royal Inquisitor is accompanying them....

It looks like the Royal Inquisitor has a rival. The Spanish Inquisition!

Because...

The Queen does not like much the Spanish Inquisition. It is your duty to

So, maybe later. Your queen gives you the chance to get rid of the Spanish Inquisition. There is no problem with the Royal Inquisitor now, interfering. He is busy with the king, speaking in a *philosophical comparison seminar. In the dark room. A very fluent conversation for them, having company.

Would you help the queen to satisfy her needs of destruction?
Do you care more about the love of your life?
Do you want to join the king in his milky business?

It's very interesting post!
Exchellent job dear @catulhu :)

Yes! Love prevails! I will survive!

You pretend to be a strong person, deny the kiss. This does not imply a command to your genitalia, which is attracting the attention of the king and queen.

You try to call your sweetheart attention by erotic gestures. Probably no one will know.

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