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RE: Adsactly Short Stories - Two Weeks To Happily Never After

in #adsactly2 years ago

Quite the hook at the introduction to the story, grabbed my interest as I read on to find out more... Quite the distressing set of circumstances, Zainab's emotions really betrayed her, first by making her wait for years and then again when I guess she let Bello get through to her that first time... But Bello is also a villain here by toying with Zainab's emotions so much, but Zainab's sister is smart, smart enough to realize what was happening

I admit that I got a little mixed up with the names at times but I think I got it sorted out, can't be a proper drama without a good number of affected people... Also wow yeah this story is a good cautionary tale, I think, timeless and relevant to everyone, maybe it'll help encourage self reflection on the real nature of a relationship so as to ward off a lifetime of unhappiness where the real winner is Bello who basically escapes without consequence so far - insult to injury

Anyway great storytelling, even if the ending wasn't so happy, but that's how things are sometimes

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Your comment made me smile. Thanks for paying attention to the story enough to dissect it meaningfully. Cheers!