RE: Actifit; Always touching peoples lives.
Hello, @ckole!
Thank you for this contribution. As I have said multiple times in the past, I am a huge fan of this project. They've put together a wonderful team that works tirelessly, so it comes as no surprise that the project keeps growing.
Your review is very informative and well-illustrated with relevant graphics. Your content is unique and editorial, and I appreciate the information you have provided us with. I particularly enjoyed reading about your personal experience with the application, and it goes without saying that I enjoyed reading your work.
That said, the post did have issues of style and proofreading, and I'd be happy to provide a few examples in a follow-up comment. Nevertheless, this is a nice contribution from you, and I look forward to your next one.
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Thank you @lordneroo. Feel free to site the issues. I'd love to adjust next time.
Hello!
I will cite a few examples for you:
This sentence should read: "It’s been a while since I wrote about Actifit", or even "It’s been a while I haven't written about Actifit"
This sentence should read: "a lot has been going on since I paused my writing."
This would be better: "Actifit is one of my favorite projects on the Steem blockchain."
This sentence should read: "Engaging others to help the less privileged is an excellent idea."
This is a better sentence: "Make sure you cite the source of any image that isn't original"
I hope you will find this comment useful.
Thank you. All issues noted.
Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!