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RE: Actifit; Always touching peoples lives.
Thank you @lordneroo. Feel free to site the issues. I'd love to adjust next time.
Thank you @lordneroo. Feel free to site the issues. I'd love to adjust next time.
Hello!
I will cite a few examples for you:
This sentence should read: "It’s been a while since I wrote about Actifit", or even "It’s been a while I haven't written about Actifit"
This sentence should read: "a lot has been going on since I paused my writing."
This would be better: "Actifit is one of my favorite projects on the Steem blockchain."
This sentence should read: "Engaging others to help the less privileged is an excellent idea."
This is a better sentence: "Make sure you cite the source of any image that isn't original"
I hope you will find this comment useful.
Thank you. All issues noted.