Poetry Slam Challenge #3: (Ecstasy)
Primal instincts taking over,
Old emotions burning dry.
Eager I await my prey,
To take away my pain.
I inhale life into my lungs,
Can I set myself in motion?
Stumbling I make my move,
Nearing my mind in freedom.
All my senses running wild,
Kismet, I have found my doom.
Ecstasy!
really detailted eye,I like it.Welcome to check mine 2,https://steemit.com/travel/@dixonloveart/living-in-melbourne-a-lazy-afternoon-in-cbd
thank you kindly !
So many things you poets are throwing at me just feeds my daily questioning... today what will stick with me is 'can I set myself in motion?' Thank you for that, it's speaking to me personally these days.
most welcome! putting yourself in motion can be a real challenge some days, weeks and sometimes even months.
I think the harder thing is putting yourself in motion towards what you really want. You can be busy all day long with jobs, I am, but if it isn't fulfilling, you aren't in motion. It's a good question...
Yes, I have to agree with you 100% on that!
Very snaky poetisizings :)
ps I love the word "Kismet"
Thank you kindly for reading and replying! I love the word kismet, it has something special and a ring to it that makes me giggle every time i hear it!
Very intense. It's nice to be able to read poetry that covers all parts of the spectrum of the primordial soup of human nature. Thanks for sharing!
Most welcome and thank you very much for reading and replying to my work! Means a lot!
Lovely short journey that bring you on. Nice touch with the drawing at the end~
thank you kindly for replying and reading my poem!
my pleasure!
Love it @poeticsnake!
Where can I find the rules of this challenge?
https://steemit.com/poetry/@prufarchy/poetry-slam-challenge-3-acrostic
This is where I found it! I look forward to yours if you enter as well :D
Hey cool! Thanks for helping out. Haha
I'll see what I can come up with!
Most welcome. The more people enter the better it will get!