Deception(Poem)
All That Is Gold Does Not Glitter,
Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost
-Tolkien
Deception(Poem)
Look me in the eyes.
She says, "No!"
Look me in the eyes.
She says, "I won't!"
Look me in the eyes.
She says, "I can't!"
Look me in the eyes.
As she walks away.
Sending you some of my new five cent love, Papa. Calling it an investment yet feel like a kid with a new toy. 😎
P.S. Sorry, nice poem. For such a simple few lines a lot of emotion came through.
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Short but sweet! These kinds of poems always go down well with me for some reason - I think they're just so aesthetically pleasing. Thanks for sharing man.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read it. I really really love these short ones at times, also!
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Nice poem. I hope one day you look at her eyes and she says yes please :) . Welcome to Poets United. We are honored to have you with us.
It is I who is honored to be among such greatness! I wrote this for a friend who has since moved on from that fated relationship. Thanks for your comment and support!
I like short poems that have so many things to say between the words and lines. Your poem did just that. Good one.
Thank you, I appreciate the compliment and you taking the time to read and respond to it!
A sharp haiku-like poem, congrats again :)
Thank you. I appreciate the support and comment.
Short, but filled with deeper meanings. Thanks for sharing this poem!
Thank you for taking the time to read it and leave me feedback!