Open mic weeks 70 "one last story" (original song)

in #openmic7 years ago (edited)

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**One last story**

I was thinking about
All the reason that you've said yesterday
About leaving me away, that suffocating me

I know exactly from the first that we met
That you are the one that I want in my life
Falling at first sight, deeply and, madly in love

No, how could you want me to forget all the memory that will last forever
Now should I get down on my knees and praying and begging so you want to stay

Give me, give me
One last story
And no one would
Replace you baby

Lock me, lock me
With last promise
I will wait you
Like no one will do

But then I know I can't survive
And I realize I can't survive
And when you nothing by my side
And no more reason to live a life

We're good together
We're meant to be each other
Don't let me in this shatter
Feeling lonely and suffer
Come back and cure this shiver
When you're with me is better
Believe me, don't say goodbye

I have to admit that everything is gone
And our sweet love never found a sweet end
But I would never regret, falling in, love with you

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Very touching performance. Well played and sung.

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Great song and performance, man!

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Wow! Mantap bro @iqbalubit jadi pengen nulis lagu barat juga. Keren... Keren!👏👏

Makasih bro, coba2 aja ni, pasti ada juga lagu barat kan? Aceh ada, indo juga, pasti ada juga lagu barat yg bg @rial17 buat..haha

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Siap, di tunggu ya bro, sukses juga @rial17

your voice was incredible on this original piece, i ws getting a little michael jackson or justin timerblake off these vox. really fantastic piece for me

Thank you so much @soundlegion, michael is my influence in music, I love everything about him very much.

Cool chords man, and emotional delivery!

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