ADSactly Poetry - Lucid Lyrics Designed to Expand Minds (Part 11)
Hello Steemians! The ADSactly Poetry : Lucid Lyrics Designed to Expand Minds series is designed to be a sort of platform for sharing some of my greatest works with @adsactly readers.
Many of the verses I've shared and continue to share were written in collaboration with a friend of mine.
Others were written as solo projects and some made their way to the recording booth.
I find that collaboration brings many benefits most of which revolve around having someone to bounce ideas off of and sort of be challenged to pick up where the other has left off.
I've got another special piece for @adsactly readers today, another powerful verse I wrote for a solo project.
I really hope readers enjoy this piece and let me know what they like about it.
Dreams : The Prelude
Got-some-flows-for-the-masses got-a-crystal-ball predict-your-future...
We know the future's sure-related-to-the-state-of-our-actions.
Hit-up some-sacred geometry 101 its time to teach the-mystical-arts-of-the-dodecahedron.
So-grab-your-courage-cause-we-need-some who said these difficult times have-just- begun.
Even the-darkest-of-dilemmas- can-be- won.
Its-a- little-known-fact to-these-sons that-we- one.
It’s the lion and the mouse without the Aesop.
While the mouse overcomes cause-of-the-big heart see the big
tree came from the acorn.
Even the giants stand on shoulders let it be known.
And the fiercest of opponents can surely be dethroned.
So-hold-that-close-to-heart-on-those-cold-nights.
A-battle-that’s-existential in-our-own-minds and the
strength-we-find-in-people-of-our-own-kind.
My Thoughts on This Verse
This verse embodies strength.
It talks about the nature of cause and effect.
It sort of teases the idea of a big battle brewing between good and evil. It touches again on a topic I like to discuss which is the nature of humanity and the will power we possess to overcome all obstacles.
I hint at the fact that obstacles are usually easier to overcome with the help of a friend.
No matter what, I'd very much like to know your thoughts and feelings about this verse so if you liked it or didn't like it, I'd love to hear your opinion either way!
Authored by: Zentalk
Click on the coin to join our Discord Chat
Witness proposal is here:
Go To Steem Witness Page
In the bottom of the page type: adsactly-witness and press vote.
Use small letters and no "@" sign. Or, click here to vote directly!
Thank you!
it was so risky and so scary, and yet at the same time, so beautiful. Maybe the truth was, it shouldn't be easy to be amazing. Then everything would be. It's the things you fight for and struggle with before earning that have the greatest worth. thanks for sharing mate :)
geometrical mystery verses you did,
and people who parallel to you won't cross your way))
This poetry program just makes our hearth happy and is something great to bring such beauties to the world. While the poetry comes from the highest happiness or the deepest sorrow, it sure let us open ourselves. Nice interpretation!
Stating about the power of facing obstacles is a motivation for life that we must always fertilize. We must be sure that we will be able to overcome the problem at hand. Of course it takes courage and always struggles. With high enthusiasm and optimism, we will be able to achieve our goals in life.
In the struggle, of course sacrifice is needed. Everything we release will come back, because sacrifice is not in vain. he will bounce on us all. Not to be confused with expectations. in fact, God will give you something we really need. and finally confidently we will soon reach the goal of life.
Thank you @zentalk
Thank you @adsactly
Thank you Steemit
Warm regard from Indonesia
I appreciate your poem, @zentalk I see in your thought a strong tendency to triumphalism (that which Kerenyi, following the study of Greek mythology, named "titanism"), attitude that I don't share much. But, as they say, "that's another matter". I particularly liked two poetic phrases: "While the mouse overcomes the cause-of-the-great heart, see the great tree came from the acorn"; "So-hold-that-close-to-heart-on-those-cold-nights". Greetings.
I liked the tone with which you started this poem, a certain irony, a humor. Too bad that tone has been diluted in the other verses. Sometimes it is good to let our feet take other directions, other spaces, other roads. Knowing the hours that await us can be frightening. Why advance if we all know where the rivers come from, where life ends? Thanks for sharing, @zentalk
Zapraszam do mnie :)