A 100-Word-Story-Competition: Sensation

in #100words4 years ago (edited)

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A Sad Story

Somebody!? Help me!” I cried.
Where are you going? Everybody’s bleeding!
I held Everybody in my arms. Warmth slowly left his lifeless body. His blank eyes stared at me. I can feel the burning sensation in my heart. Somebody abandoned me. It crushed my soul.

You’re gonna be fine!” Nobody said.
I smiled weakly. Tears poured.
I cried so much when Everybody died. I cried my heart out. I cried until I fell asleep. I cried more when I woke up. Somebody should’ve been there with me. Yet, he left.
Oh! Anybody.” His voice trembled.
Nobody was all I got.


Message to the Reader
This is my first entry to the #100words story contest. I can't decide of a title so I just went on with what's written above. I have written a short story before with the same characters: Anybody, Nobody, Somebody and Everybody. I posted it on Facebook. Lame. Yes. I first saw the big four in a children's story when I was 9 or 10 years old, I guess. It was called, "That's not my Job". You can check the story here. And I thought, "That's what you call CLEVER!" I adapted it in writing. I hope you, guys like it.
P.S. Thank you @writing-trail for the contest! You're awesome!
Cheers!
@krizia

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I think it is excellent - well done you!
Thank you for taking part and supporting this initiative. Upped.

Thank you @ebryans! 😊

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Thank you for taking part and I hope that you will enter again next week.
Namaste!

Thank you so much @ebryans! 😊 I actually need help about the 100 Trail. I don't have an Open Ledger Account. I don't know what to do about it.

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Thank you! I'm sorry I was afk. Anyways, I went to there already. So far, nobody's responding. I guess I'll just have to wait.

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Oh. I'm sorry. I don't understand much about this whale sized votes. I'm confused.

I won the whale vote contest - watch out! Good things coming!

Congratulations man! I'm happy for you!

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