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RE: Sound: Love Lost, Love Found (100 word story @writing-trail :)
Love it!
Couple of typos you might want to amend but I love the power of the music - very visible effects of the penetrating sound.
Upped!
Thanks!
Only found one typo (why we need editors!)
Sorry to be fastidious - I like to think of it as helpful!
'descent' or 'decent'? 'base' or 'bass'?
It's just a shame if I publish this and ... I hope you see this as helpful and not meddling!
Helpful is my intent. Namaste!
Thank you so much - constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated, if not essential!