Title : Invited Ghost (Goosebumps Storytelling contest #1 )

in #yougavemegoosebumps6 years ago (edited)

This is my entry for story contest by @cklai.

What can you write about?

  • You could write about anything that you might think it is a good story that gives us goosebumps and you are welcome to participate.

You could write about

  • From your experience in person
  • A legend that worth the title of goosebumps
  • Stories from your friends
  • A scene from a movie or books
  • Your imagination or maybe you are paranoid

Invited by Ghost..!!!

Peace to all the steemens. I want to share a story I've heard from my mother. This incident occurred in a village in Malaysia in the 1960s when my mother was a teenager. This is a true story and not a mere design.

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This incident happened to one of my mother's brothers. His name is Nek Siti. Nek Siti is a Nasi lemak seller in one of the schools in the village. Every day Nek Siti will accompany her daughter-in-law, who has just given birth. Nek Siti's home and her daughter-in-law are about 500 meters away. So every day before Maghrib, Nek Siti will go to her daughter-in-law to care for a newborn child. One day, before Nek Siti went out to his daughter-in-law's house, she told her husband, David. He said "Bang do not forget to take me at 5 am". After remarks, Nek Siti went to her daughter-in-law's house. On that night everything was asleep, the voice of Tok Daud called Nek Siti. "Ti oh Ti, Ti!" Tok Daud sounded. Her daughter-in-law who heard the noise was shockingly sleeping Nek Siti. "Mak Mak, it's coming, Oh Mak, wake up," said her daughter-in-law....

When Siti got up. Without looking at the clocks, Nek Siti reached the shawl and opened the door. Seen a man who was not spared as Tok Daud stood somewhere far from the door of the house. Nek Siti was walking according to the man whom Daud had imagined.
What is so strange, this time Tok Daud went a long way ahead of Nek Siti without a word. He's holding a small flashlight. Nek Siti, who was a bit old-natured, tried to run as fast as Tok Daud. "Bang, oi Bang, wait, why is it fast?" asked Nek Siti.
Suddenly the man who walked before Nek Siti disappeared from Nek Siti's view. How surprised Nek Siti is. Nek Siti became scared and her feet trembling. He strengthened herself and walked back to her home near the scene. Nek Siti knocked on the door as hard as she could and yelled to call her husband Tok Daud who was sleeping in the house. Apparently the new clock was at 3 am and the man who invited Nek Siti was not Tok Daud. It was reported that Nek Siti continued to fever and could not sell at school for a few days.

The End.


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