Writing feedback request for my product reviews
Hello, I saw your idea for a writingfeedback request group and would like to take you up on the idea. In return for some feedback I will check for the feedback tag and try to contribute.
I am not an expert blogger, but thought I would take advantage of the Steem platform to learn how to blog about my favorite subject: BBQ These are my first few attempts at original content, have a look and let me know what you think.
https://steemit.com/bbq/@bbqbear/things-to-do-the-day-before-your-big-holiday-bbq
https://steemit.com/bbq/@bbqbear/bbq-product-review-grill-brick
https://steemit.com/bbq/@bbqbear/bbq-product-review-grizzly-bbq-gear-grilling-mat
Comments, format ideas, and suggestions for improvement would be appreciated. Thanks!
I think your articles are exemplary! Short paragraphs and several images makes them pleasant to read. I can't give you any suggestions on how to improve them.
What's really nice is how you use strong emphasis instead of second or third level headings. If the article is short and paragraphs too, headings often make the article look cluttered.
It seems like the image height restricts image size on steemit. If you use wider images they use more space horizontally and look better.
Good idea about wider images. I was focusing on keeping them consistent size, stretching them across would make it look better too.
Thank you for the feedback and image idea!