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RE: LOVE, LIKE HIS - Chapter 18 - The Library - An Original Story by @papa-pepper
Just read Ch 7. and was expecting the twist but then it came later than expected. The detective Cromwell is really an agitating character, so good job on creating that affect. Reading the dialogue was hard pressing and nails on chalkboard how annoyingly persistent he was.