Even though I am a wicked entertainment writer with "magical" researching skills, I always enjoy realism in written form (trust me, it's not easy to achieve it as you may think). For the past 50 minutes I have been reading all the parts you've posted here. The picture of the girls goes perfectly with the raw and realistic content here. I see traces of Stephen Crane in your writing. Very good job, man! Up-vote and follow to see more from you ;)