Another World (a "What If" poem for Creative Writing Challenge - Task #6)
Another World
What if parallel worlds do exist?
Oh! That would be such pure bliss!
What if we can visit the "us" in another world?
Will other stories come unfold?
What if the bad decisions that we made...
Can be corrected in the parallel world trade?
Wouldn't it be awesome to fail?
Because in another world, we hail!!!
What if we can choose which world to live?
Wouldn't it be great though hard to believe?
In reality life is an endless trial and error
In the parallel world, we know what's better!
But what if we just live our life as it is?
Accept consequence from the choices we miss...
What if from the start, we choose wisely?
Only then, we can live life unregretfully
Every time I think of "What ifs", the concept of another world or a parallel universe always comes to mind... It's a bit crazy and disturbing... but who knows? haha.. xD
This is my official entry for for Creative Writing Challenge - Task #6 : What if... by @steemfluencer
Here's the link of the challenge --> https://steemit.com/writing/@steemfluencer/creative-writing-challenge-task-6-what-if
By the way, this isn't the first time I wrote about "Parallel Worlds"... See? I'm a bit crazy about this concept!
If you're interested, you can read my "essay" about it --> https://steemit.com/storycubes/@tegoshei/parallel-world-story-cubes-week-3-by-jacobtothe-my-entry
Thanks a bunch for dropping by!
Love lots, @tegoshei
excellent poetry here! I was reading the challenge and originally thought it was more like a structure for poetry than a real story, and you went ahead and did it as poetry. Nicely done!
Thank you so much sir! ^^ @steemfluencer's challenges are lotsa fun! ^^ and I totally enjoy doing these challenges with people like you.. ^^
Top notch!
Thank you so much! It means a lot.. ^^
Gods, I love the idea of parallel worlds. I was so hooked reading Stephen Hawking's theories on multiverses, you should check it out if you haven't yet hahahaha. 😂 (Sorry, big geek on stuff like this; had to grab the chance when you mentioned this on your poem lols).
BTW, do you mind changing any of your tags into #philippines? 😊 The Philippine community is currently working on a curation project, and the goal is to pull together Pinoy steemians using the tags #philippines (for English posts) and #pilipinas (for local dialects post). Our goal is to find quality content, and I sure know that you're one creative Pinay steemian. Yiiiieee. Kiligs. HAHAHA. Sige na. Not a hoax LOL. 😂
(Medyo shady yung pagkakasabi ko sorry naaa hahahahuhuhuhu. Wala pang official announcement, but we've begun. Hihi.)
Yay!!! Finally someone who can relate to my otherworldly mind!! Ikaw pala ang matagal ko nang hinahanap! <3 I haven't read it yet... gonna find one... may ebook ba nun? hihi :)
Ohh~ sure... will do that! ^^ I'll change some tags on my posts na... Ayeeee~ wag ganyan te.... baka maniwala ako.. weeeee~ hahahaha xDDD
Okay lang kung shady kasi bet ko si Slim Shady!!!lol.. xD
YEEEES! Magka-wavelength talaga tayo. Chariiing hahahahaha. 😂 Anyway, you can begin with this one: Into a Black Hole. Kinda science-y, because he was explaining why it's possible that multiverse exists. Pero from there, marami ka nang mababasang interesting pa hahahaha. Kaya love ko yung Orange na manga/anime (napanood mo na?) at Noein (maganda 'to! Weird, pero maganda naman lols) at Steins;Gate hehe.
Maniwala ka na besh. 😂 Hindi ako marunong magsinungaling. Wink wink. 😉
Okaaay uwian na. 😂😂😂 HAHAHAHAAHHA.
Ahahaha!!! Yaaaay~!!! ^^ Walang charing2... <3 Wow.. Thank you ng maraming marami!!! Will read it later.. ^^ Ohh~ yeah.. I've read the manga.. super ganda ng concept... pero naging super interested aq sa Parallel World when I read "Katekyoushi Hitman Reborn" na manga.. haven't watched Noein at Steins;Gate... OMG! I love WEIRD.. haha.. xD
YASS! I dream.. believe... and survive.. lol.. #kakornihan
HAHAHAHAHA... xDDDD
Reborn miloves! 💕 And the mysterious case of Lambo. LOL. Favorite ko din yan nung high school eh. Hehe. (Plus Prince of Tennis ganern). Awesome yung Steins;Gate. Feeling mo mad scientist ka na din kasi pinapanood mo yun hahahaha.
Cool... will watch that.. will be away for a few.days though... ohhh.. Lambo!! yung 20 years version nya.. mygaaaaad! ang hawt.. sorry Hibari my ultimate hubby.. hahahaha.. owemji... PoT is LOVE...
There a ton who can relate, i tell you! But i get you in how you meant that!
Knowing that there are people who I can relate to and talk about the subject with is awesome... :) Thanks ^^
Nice one! Keep steeming =)
Thanks a bunch! ^^
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STOPThe what ifs ehehehe.. I need to see that parallel world...