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RE: Lovestruck - A Bloody Modern Fairy Tale - Part One

in #writing • 7 years ago

Moar! I need more. This sounds like an amazing start. I think the only thing I lacked was nausea. I would feel nauseated by him and need to suppress it. Perhaps with a smile. It works in suppressing nausea.

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     7 years ago 

    Ah! True! Authorial intrusion perhaps...I have an iron stomach lol. So glad you enjoyed it and inspired to get to the rest :)

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    I have an emotional bowel.

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     7 years ago 

    Hahaha! I have never heard it put that way, I love it!

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      Me neither, until I put it that way. My doctor calls it irritable. I resent that. It's not irritable, it's emotional. Happy? Nausea and gas! Triggered? Must poop right now and baft at the same time and see if I can create vacuum in me!

      Emotional bowel. :sigh:

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