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RE: Bleed with Style. Part 1 (An original vampire short story.)
Okay, I am curious and hooked. Just one comment: you might want to split the beginning into more paragraphs for easier reading. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks, still getting used to how posts look on here, will post the next part tomorrow :)
Yeah, editing long texts here is hellish. I just posted the 2nd chapter of my book and it took me half an hour to get all the markdown right. Ugh.
I'm not very good at that side of things. I tend to open a bottle of whisky, drink and write stories. Anything beyond that goes over my head.
Same, but with coffee and boring AF work articles. :(