Trying to write something

in #writing7 years ago

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I'm thinking to write fantasy novels, maybe just for fun, for the seek of experience. Here are some sentences, paragraphs, ideas, a short story.

"A young lady is finding herself standing up in living room with plenty of light from the afternoon sun, just like she loved it abundant, even it would turn her cheap furniture into white alongside with other hippy or not important stuffs.
Girl stopped her loose moves arround the house, as she just answered to her dear friend on the phone, the conversation was brief, a bit confusing.
Unicorn, as she used call him with affection and amusement, would like to visit for other reason than drink or get stoned togheter so she thought it is about their recent hobby.
The visit will happen in moments, the instructions were simple; it wasn't the first time when they asked and did any possible thing for each other, so she'll stay intrigued, absorbing the warmth and energy from outside the windows, making her ears feel like fire and even more receptive.
Unicorn is there, door makes a sound, but her mind didn't care that much for mistery now, ..when the instructions cross her mind again. No hughs, no talk, keep distance, eyes on me..

  • Hi dude, said the guy! Stay present, listen to me

    • Sure Unicorn..
  • In the name of Our Lord in Heavens, His son Jesus Christ and the Holy Gost I demand any evil to leave this body, mind and spirit. Hear me satan, leave now trembling in fear for God!

The young girl with pale skin, with so much harmony and peace on her face that you'd had to look few times to remember the colour of her eyes and other of it's features, tilt her head on a side, as she felt warmth on her throat and ears raising, finds herself talking without control with strange nasty feminine tone, and showing vivid wet eyes:

-Dude we are more than one here, to whom you talking to?

She was wearing a gratefull, cheerfull smile..., only their hearts would know how it feels the battle that just started.
For seconds the top of her head hurt, her body feelt the pressure of tons, and she wouldn't know, untill then, it is possible to release air from her body for as long as at least half of minute.
Then she sees him, he was too important, he was her stone, nothing of what he would ask it would be too much, the voices sinked, her mind was again all hers, all body would strugle for the state of consciousness but the nature will compensate it with endorphins, she was near the finish line to pass the moment, that felt safe.

Two friends testing the way they getting the texts in the bible, as said above, their new hobby. "

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A writer is anyone who writes. This template is designed for movies, but it will give you an idea of how to flesh your story into a full story:

https://steemit.com/writing/@thewisesloth/the-hollywood-movie-plot-outline-structure-in-a-chart

Thank you for feedback, I'd write screen plays too :)

thats great buddy, keep it up and follow your dreams and what you want to do in life. I'll be reading your future posts.

Thank you, cheers !

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