please give feedback on article

sydneysweden (56)in #writing • 8 years ago (edited)

Please give me feedback on my writing in this article.

I will share 20% of the earnings of the article evenly with everyone who has given me meaningful feedback.

most important to me is grammar feedback.

The feedback is to be given on this page.

8 years ago in #writing by sydneysweden (56)

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jamtaylor (71) 8 years ago (edited)

Would you prefer feedback here, or on the article?

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sydneysweden (56) 8 years ago

The feedback is to be given on this page.

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