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RE: Harsh but fair – tips for making your fiction writing better than ever. 1
Hmmm. How about the the non-spoken?
She nodded in response,
He shook his head no,
Her lips moved, but produced no sound as she stared at him in disbelief.
I'm curious if you have a uniform example for when the character doesn't "say" anything.
All bets are off ;)
Imagine me with an overly wrinkled forehead, squinting my eyes at your reply. :P
Buy yourself some better glasses :)
But I don't have any to begin with!
Wait. Maybe that's the real problem here.