You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: The Mask Maker (A Short Story of Horror and Suspense - Written by Matthew Munsey - Edition 2)

in #writing6 years ago

This was a highly enjoyable read. You created the exact mix of tension and intrigue. It flowed beautifully and I love the way you simply alluded to the methods of his material collection.

I read a book once, called Fear - I can't remember the author's name, so that's not much use to you because there is more than one book with this title. Anyway, the general premise was a kidnapper who used people's fear against them be wearing masks of their greatest fears. This reminded me of that book.

I'm looking forward to reading more form you. Oh, I hate to be that jerk, but if you're like me, you will be happy I pointed it out - a slight spelling error in the 9th paragraph - lest sentence (I don't think you meant Masker Maker:

The Masker Maker, the keeper of lost and reborn life, was satisfied.

Thanks heaps for sharing this.

Sort:  

Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it! A good psychological horror story is always nice, I'll try and check that out. As for the spelling mistake - yes, thank you! I despise proofreading, that would have remained for a long time I'm sure.

I'm glad you found it helpful rather than annoying. I'm not a fan of proofreading either, so am always grateful to people who point things out if I miss them!!

Oh you bet. Definitely better to get it fixed now than to let it sit!

Coin Marketplace

STEEM 0.16
TRX 0.16
JST 0.028
BTC 73187.18
ETH 2574.60
USDT 1.00
SBD 2.41