Like how you presented the story the interaction between Saddie and Ashley and Ashuri, you have spent a lot of time for description and reading it it feels like you are there present too. Like the dialogs that makes a story interesting the interaction between heroes. Entertaining story and well presented :)
UwU ~ Thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments! Anyways, I understand and I like your message in spite of few gramatically things. You got a keen eye, I’ll say that; bene nota that Ashuri and Ashley are just two different names for the same person. Anyways, have a great day @stef1!