Classic morality play, and I can imagine how you are itching to flesh out this story with heaps of juicy details.
The hard part, for me at least, is cutting back all the details that seem to matter, but nobody wants to read.
as for me,
I am simply stunned that we choose the same name for the central character.
much lols
I only changed one letter from yesterday's character (well yesterday figuratively speaking as I am well behind) Mike to make Mika.
And here she is again.

well done