the Never Ending Story #3

in #writing7 years ago (edited)

The idea of the NEVER ENDING STORY started at this with the post

This post is brought forward from this post

This is a social experiment.. so lets just get started to see where it leads.
2 other people have agree to try to get this started, @kilbride and @davemccoy

RULES

Try not to do an instant twist, especially if the twist doesn't add to the story.
Example of such a bad twist, would be something like "waking up from a dream, and everything before was just a dream"... or "teleported into an alternate universe, and everything were different" <-- you probably want to have a better context then just a one liner sudden change twist.

So here goes.


by @sinlg

It's a rainy day, typical weather in the tropica Island country Singapore. John has just arrived and has checked in to the Marina Bay Sands Hotel, a 5-star hotel situated in scenic bay front area.

John is in Singapore for a business meeting scheduled for the next day, meanwhile..........


by @andreyyte

As he sits in the balcony the doorbell goes. Attending to the door, there she was staring endlessly in his face like she had found a beautiful sight unwilling to let go... He was bare-chested. His arms announced his athletic physique. "How may I help you." His voice broke the silence. She could hear his voice approach her like a distant voice calling her back to consciousness. "I am sorry. I was asked to attend to your requests should there be any...

By @christianyocte

John smiled at the attendant and creatively said that he now remembers his request. In his mind, he wants to see more of this beautiful sight. He wants to take advantage of enjoying the sight of the woman she thinks very beautiful. So, John announces, "I have called because I have a problem with the sheets or the room, I want you to take a look at it... Darling. ".

The beautiful lady replied....

by @leebaong

... " Not a problem sir. Here to serve".
"Just call me John", John replied to the attendant offering his hand.
"Hello John. I am Jane. Nice to meet you" Jane said.
With their handshake, John felt the warmth of her skin. It was so soft just like the untouched ocean, without knowing that he's been holding her hand for a little longer already.
"John, may I have my hands now?" Jane said.
"Ohw! My apologies", John answered.

by @annekins

Embarrassed, John slowly let go of Jane's soft hands. She smiled tenderly back at him, deep inside she knew he was already starstruck. John on the other hand also realized that this random meeting won't end just like that. So he courageously asked Jane if she would be willing to go out on a date with him later. What she replied was truly next truly was unexpected....

by @gracefavour

Are you stylishly asking me out? Jane said as they both smiled. Sure! i will. Surprised and shocked by her positive response,John replied,i will pick you up tomorrow by 2pm. She nodded in affirmation and left his sight. he could hardly sleep through out the night....

by @markkennard

After a restless night, John awoke from his slumber. His watch read 9am but suddenly he realised that he had forgotten to change the time on his watch to Singapore time. John was running late for his business meeting. He leapt from his bed, threw on his clothes and pulled a comb through his hair. There was no time for a shave and his voice was raspy from his restless sleep. Oh well thought John, I guess I’ve got my sexy voice on today. The business meeting was long and drawn out and Johns mind was elsewhere. He was looking forward to seeing Jane later that day and his work colleagues could see his mind was not on the job. The meeting concluded at 130pm and John could not get away fast enough. Traffic on the road was at a standstill so he decided it would be quicker to run. The hot singaporean sun was particularly harsh and it wasn’t long before beads of sweat were dripping down his forehead. Hair ruffled and unshaven, John arrived in the hotel foyer with minutes to spare. As he walked into the hotel bar he could see Jane in all her beauty sitting at a table awaiting his arrival, not a hair out of place but she wasn’t alone. With sweat cascading down the sides of his cheeks and looking very much worse for wear, John nervously made his approach. With an almost unnoticeable grin Jane was the first to speak, “ I would like you to meet my parents” Jane announced.

by @markaparre

"Ohw Hello sir!" as John shaked his hand with Jane's dad. "It's nice meeting you!" he continued greeting Jane's mom. John, not knowing what to do, excused himself to the comfort room to fix some things. He cannot understand what is happening, why are Jane's parents in the resto. "But still, no matter what happen, tonight will be a great night!" with expectations he said. Fixing his sweat and everything, John is thinking about how beautiful Jane is and that he must make this day so special for her, especially her parents are also present. With all of these, John then went out of the comfort room. He was surprised seeing ...

by @wanderlass

Jane's dad waiting for him at the narrow corridor just outside the washroom's door. His eyes were scrutinizing John from head to toe. It felt so awkward for John. He was only prepared to meet Jane that night.
"I need to talk to you now." Jane's dad said eagerly.
"Uhm ah...sure, sir. Would you like to talk here?" John asked.
"Yes, it is very important. It is about...

by @crystannson

... You, young man once again where did you say you come from", meanwhile Jane still inside with her mum staring at each other silently. And her mom broke the silence, " Jane dear, I want what will make you happy also whatis best for you". Jane now curious to hear more isn't really smiling, "from all you have shared with us we are not so sure...

(please continue by commenting) . I will collate them into proper posts from time to time....
or if the post is still editable I'll try to append them ....

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... You, young man once again where did you say you come from", meanwhile Jane still inside with her mum staring at each other silently. And her mom broke the silence, " Jane dear, I want what will make you happy also whatis best for you". Jane now curious to hear more isn't really smiling, "from all you have shared with us we are not so sure...

Hey @sinlg. I've nominated DaveMcCoy to win a Trophy token for all the efforts he has put in. My vote might be stronger if it would be backed up by others. The Thropy token is a motivational award. If you agree that we owe dave one (or many), you could maybe back up my vote to make sure he wins one? Here's the link to the post and my comment

That was superb @simplymike, I just backed up your post.

seeing...

Jane's dad waiting for him at the narrow corridor just outside the washroom's door. His eyes were scrutinizing John from head to toe. It felt so awkward for John. He was only prepared to meet Jane that night.
"I need to talk to you now." Jane's dad said eagerly.
"Uhm ah...sure, sir. Would you like to talk here?" John asked.
"Yes, it is very important. It is about...

"Ohw Hello sir!" as John shaked his hand with Jane's dad. "It's nice meeting you!" he continued greeting Jane's mom. John, not knowing what to do, excused himself to the comfort room to fix some things. He cannot understand what is happening, why are Jane's parents in the resto. "But still, no matter what happen, tonight will be a great night!" with expectations he said. Fixing his sweat and everything, John is thinking about how beautiful Jane is and that he must make this day so special for her, especially her parents are also present. With all of these, John then went out of the comfort room. He was surprised seeing ...

Hi @sinlg, this comment is not to be added to the story ;) I would just like to let you know that I like this game that you hosted and it's very engaging and creative at the same time. That's why I have featured this post in my first Minnow Fridays. This is still part of the #newbieresteemday initiative :)

thank you. I'm also exploring mining Smartcash now

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