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RE: The dream-hopper, a short story of fiction
Wow!!!! Great piece but the suspense is killing already, please don't tell that's the end? Did she eventually return to her host body? It seems the mother had genuinely love but they've haven't seen coming ground to express it. Wild imagination, I never heard of dreamers. When you mentioned eating once a day and sleeping for 22 hours, I was forced to ask whether she pee or defecate at all, atleast, she's eating. Overall, I'm impressed, Weldon Linda.
That is the end, it is a short story after all :D
Well, she sleeps 22 hours and does everything else in-between, she might get up multiple times for a couple of minutes but the total amount of sleep is 22 hours :D
Hmmmmnnn. Though I know that the power lies with the writer. It was a nice read, good job.
You can let your imagination run further, you decide where the story goes!