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RE: A World Long Sundered -- Chapter 1
Ahh so I did a unexpected thing there.. Lol 😆
Well then I read the original version not bad.
I really enjoyed reading it, but ok so the other one has links to the other chapters?
Yeah that could help 😉lol
You are incredible, just saying.
Funny I was just writing and saying the same thing in my other answer to you. About how happy I am to reconnect with you and se how far you have come and to be able to share your world 😊 made my day Bigtime 👍
Thank you for being you. Cheers
Yeah, the edited version is much stronger I think but lacks a bit of the detail, like the verse. I will most likely put the verse back in later though I think. I can't wait to hear your thoughts regarding the series. Feel free to offer suggestions or comments about anything! Cheers!
I will do that for sure 😉 you know me can't keep my mouth or pen chut.. Lol
I'm sure it is amazing. Cheers