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RE: [Original Novel] Pressure 3: Beautiful Corpse, Part 7

in #writing8 years ago (edited)

Olivia spotted Violet collapsed on the floor, bone white, her dress in tatters. “Something’s wrong out there, isn’t it? With my body.”
“Don’t slip away from me.” Olivia pleaded, her voice breaking up. “I’m losing everything, piece by piece. James. Vivian. There’s nothing else left.
Olivia rushed back to lab to find Violet, but Violet was transferred, she couldn’t find her.
While she look for her she heard Violet’s voice whispering weakly to her.
“You’re close...I can feel you. I don’t know where I am. It’s dark, cold and loud.” While both Olivia and Violet know they e is something very wrong, Olivia is trying to assure Violet “We’ll escape to the surface together, start a new life.”
While looking for Violet to save her, Olivia knew it was time to replace her body parts. She eventually does as Vivien did.
Olivia doesn’t feel she needs James anymore, she feels that he is where he belongs to. Instead she has to rescue Violet....
I hope she rescues Violet, she is all she has left.

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