You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Did I Kill a Girl and Liked it? Part 1/2View the full contextView the direct parentriciusfischer (53)in #writing • 8 years ago no need to be sacarcastic...
Really dude, it is better written than the first one. I just want to know if Dr Sanchez tried to intubate the tiny baby and failed, or just stop CPR, you know a delivery could be a pretty troublesome moment.
OK i'll post part two tonight