Yaaaasssss! GREAT beginning and I hope you keep this one going. :-)
The repeated theme of "avoid the skin" is a great hook and raises a fundamental question that will keep folks reading for the answer! :-)
Yaaaasssss! GREAT beginning and I hope you keep this one going. :-)
The repeated theme of "avoid the skin" is a great hook and raises a fundamental question that will keep folks reading for the answer! :-)
Thank you! I like it so much better this way. ^_^
Part 2 coming soon.