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RE: My Vacation On the Exotic Shores of a Black Hole - Part 10
Finally I am all caught up, I liked this part a bit more, felt like it was picking up some pace because of the different things happening, some nice action in the start, contemplating julia , incoming debris , failing exo-suit. Damn shit is getting hot up in here.
Not much else to say really, I just enjoyed this part and think the story is getting stronger with each one, a bit more of a back story would also be nice since one does not simply run guns for a living.
Well, he doesn't run guns. Not intentionally anyway.
There will probably be more backstory as time goes on. But for now, he wanted to be an independent shipping captain, likely from back in his school days at least, but ended up working for someone else, due to having to pay off the loans he had to take out to get the ship. Not a ton of backstory, but more than it started out with. It establishes a dream, a drive, that he's working towards.