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RE: Hunger (a horror shortstory)
Wow! Good storyline. Adrenaline pumping in my ear as I read on. You are a natural story teller. What I can say is that you need to create pleasurefill distractions to lace the plotting of the story. This way you will not freak us all out. 😂
I also have horror stories on my wall too, like the carnivorous tree. You might want to take a look. You will enjoy it.
Thanks - I'll use the break advice posted by @dirge next time :)