Not bad at all! Kept me reading and I'm not usually one for horror, I would read the next part when you get it done! Cheers!
Not bad at all! Kept me reading and I'm not usually one for horror, I would read the next part when you get it done! Cheers!
It's just a short story. "I don't stop—I keep going" is the end. Thanks for reading!
No worries! It's good that I feel that I want to read more.
After reading your comment, I actually thought, "This could have a second part."
Haha, of course it could, you have a hook in the story with no resolution. It's whether you want to write it or not :P