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RE: New Story - again written exclusively on Steemit - WiP - Bouncer Part 34
It reads well, maybe a bit overwhelming with the level of information. I think the pictures could be better though, it would be nice if they helped telling the story a bit more.
I write a short story here on Steemit myself and post it with cartoon pictures. If you'd like i could try some for you, see if that works?
You can check my blog to see some examples.
It's part of a novel.
Novels are more wordy than graphic novels because you have to get the images into the readers' heads without pictures.
I like graphic novels too, but this isn't one of them.