You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Dorothy’s Milky LetterView the full contextnegativer (62)in #writing • 6 years ago Nicely done! Very melancholy, and I like the setup here of remembering the dead and the past, as seen by a child.
Thank you! I used almost all of my capacity. The only space for improvement I see from my current level are the descriptions. They could add up to the atmosphere.