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RE: Creative Writing Challenge 2.1 - Tony's List - Starving Charlie
Good choice of quotes here! Your story led off with it, mine finished with it :) Clever story and a lot of tiny little twists (like, I thought you 'messed up' on the red wine, but you mentioned the white wine right after). Nicely done!
Thank you, it was fun to write too!