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RE: [SHORT STORY] Dust Devil - Part 03
The story is still going strong. I like the pacing, and tension you have created through your writing. It has quite the feeling of suffocation, with the heightened drama and uncertainty involved. Looking forward to the rest (I know I am behind, but will catch up).
Hey, thanks I'm glad you like it! And have kept reading it, appreciate that.
And the story is about to conclude, it has 2 parts remaining.