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RE: Living the Dream Part 3 …In Another Room of the Dream

in #writing6 years ago

I do not see that this is a dream room, it seems like a nightmare! I would have run out of there. Many energies and egos at war, apparently! I feel that our protagonist does not belong to that world and has to make a huge effort to fit. Beautiful afternoon

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Yes, you are so perceptive, Nancy - all of the energy in the story is generated by Audrey's attempts to fit into this anti-world

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