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RE: [Original Novel] Pressure, Part 4

in #writing6 years ago

I think I'm living her panic! This part is very well narrated. Every detail of the outer space and her body makes fear more true. This could also be a dream? How can they disappear? I think that ending leads us to think that he has taken control. It's my turn to wait!

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