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RE: [Original Novel] Metal Fever 2: The Erasure of Asherah, Part 44

in #writing6 years ago

I like how your stories interconnect with each other, @alexbeyman. As I read that last part, I remembered the building where the orphanage operated and that it was multiplying over and over again. An almost serial reproduction of concrete and metal. This dialogue not only lets us know the thoughts of our protagonist, it also helps us to intuit the environment, the situation in which the planet finds itself. A chaos produced by the humans themselves, but I don't know if they can solve it. Beautiful day.

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