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RE: The Haunting of Lust in the ER
Nicely-written, interesting story. The only thing that needs improvement is the proper use of punctuation marks.
Nicely-written, interesting story. The only thing that needs improvement is the proper use of punctuation marks.
wow thanks! I've always had that problem, I speak English as a second language, I know it's a lot to ask but do you have like a source on it?