"As young and eager spirits grow,
Embracing that which doth engage,
So choosing what and who to trust,
Yet knowing we'll return to dust"

This part of your poem, was probably the most engaging for me.
I've never seen in such a short amount of words someone summarize the cycle of life so truthfully. I seem to always find joy in writing that I can genuinely relate too, not in terms of enjoyment but in terms of applicability.