Creative Writing Challenge - Task #6: Believe

in #writing8 years ago

Creative Challenge Writing Task #6

Write a 'What if...' story that develops gradually. Try reaching as much stages as you can, but don't be a perfectionist.


BELIEVE


What if I told you a story I know you won’t believe of a place I was on a day that no one could foresee. A story only a select few are able to share.

What if I knew all the inside details of this sacred day. Would you believe me?

What if I shared a tale of destruction people still struggle to believe was real? A day where towering infernos became live TV and the impossible became reality.

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What if I gave you an inside view to an experience only I could see. One filled with hallways of crumbling walls as I tried to flee.

What if I told you of thousands of people clinging to staircase rails as we swayed and prayed?

What if I described a heavy dark smoke coming up from below making it harder and harder to breathe? A look on my face of distraught and worry as my mind was starting to see a possible end.

What if by some miracle I told you the smoke started to clear and we all began rushing down the steps to make urgent headway.

What if I described the service men running up into hell as I was running down to the safety of the street.

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What if I watched in horror as people fell to their fate. My front row view of this tragic date.

What if you begin to realize my story is real.

Now go ahead, tell me how you feel.


Regards,
Mitchell J
Thanks for the pics pixabay

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nice writing story ...continue

Well done! This is a great use of the source direction, and a tribute to the bravery of firefighters around the world.

Thanks! I like how there is a slight different take away from it for different people.

Nice writing! And once again welcome to the challenge!

Thank you! Following you so I can try and keep up with the contest, try being the key word lol.

Yeah : ) Try doing so! I'll try delivering the best challenges I can.

Crushing the game on round one. I see you smalls.

I do what I can..lol

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