Losing Yourself
Losing Yourself
Two of us.
Yet one knows how
to love more.
Only one knows how this
could be a forever
that might not last.
A part of us breaks,
to feel, that things
might get better,
that maybe love
would come back and stay.
Maybe things can be fixed.
Or maybe they'll
stay the same.
Your heart breaks,
your mind is a chaos
yet you live in
and out of love.
And people.
They tell you.
To save yourself.
To be your own hero.
But how can you,
when you can't let
your heart from breaking
and your mind from thinking right.
And because you're losing,
all that you wish
for is a forever in the
number of days you have.
Great writing style i like it followed waiting for more
Thanks for follow.
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Awesome writing , i truly related to this story as what your saying is so true
Thank you so much :)
Your words took me somewhere beautiful. Thank you for sharing :)
I hope you enjoyed.
Thank you so much :)
Yes. It would be a huge lie to say otherwise. You are most welcome! :)
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Would love to learn to write poems this good. I found your poem inspiring
I wrote a poem recently. Feel free to visit my wall
Thank you so much @diamondgirl.
It feels great that my ppem can be inspiartion for someone :)
I like, great job
Spanish/ Español
El amor es una palabra de cuatro letras, muy complicada y veces suele confundirnos a nosotros los seres humanos. siguiendote y apoyandote muy buenas palabras. 100% Venezolana.
English/ Inglés
Love is a four-letter word, very complicated and often confuses us humans. Following and supporting you very good words. 100% Venezuelan
I am glad you liked it.
Thank you so much for your comment :)
This has existential angst and the truth of humanity woven deep between words. Thank you for sharing!
Thank you for you time to give it a read.
I am glad you enjoyed it, Please follow for more of such daily poems.
An impressive poem
Thank you so much:)
You're welcome
Can you visit my blog ?
I had a look.
I followed you!
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Good poem @mindfreak. Not to be a spelling nazi, but it should be "Losing"
Oh yea yes. Thats a stupid mistake.
Thank you for read @sgtechservices
I love your poems too
No worries man. I just thought you'd like to correct it. Thanks for the compliment. I'm happy you enjoy my work too.