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RE: Ahe’ey - Breakfast with a View (An Original Novel - Part 6)
You have a very enjoyable light narrative style. It reminded me of the Little Longnose (fairy tale) by German writer Wilhelm Hauff. In the fairy tale, a boy is brought to a witch house where anthropomorphic guinea pigs and squirrels are sliding on a crystal floor wearing walnut shells on their feet. When I read your stuff I catch myself that I often don’t pay attention to what characters are talking about or doing, but only slide down the page on the little walnut shells lullabied by their sound.
"anthropomorphic guinea pigs and squirrels are sliding on a crystal floor wearing walnut shells on their feet"
What a delightful image! I must check out that book. Thanks @mgaft1. J.