Apoligize for my last verse, HERE YOU HAVE A BETTER ONE!
Dear People,
Yesterday i wrote my first blog and verse about how social media can turn against you. Because it was my first blog, i was curious and to fast with posting my first blog. if i did more time on the verse, wich i dropped yesterday, it would be much better than it is now. I'm sorry for that and to make it up to you and myself, I will post a much better one. Why am i sorry for myself? I think it is important that you always show the best of yourself. Because i want to stand in for what i can, and not for my mistakes. So i try to do everything as good as possible. That's the reason why i am sorry for my last verse.
I hope you'll enjoy this one more and if you do, don't forget to like and follow @marlines
a devil on my shoulder, the angel on the other side is gone.
i feel the fire burning, what the fuck is going on.
i feel darkness in my head, my eyes are shutdown.
my thoughts must doing a marathon, cause they runaround.
My head is heavy and my soul feels empty.
i do not have 1 problem, i got plenty.
I don't know what to do, i'm wandering in a depression.
put a barrel on my head from a Smiths and Wesson.
i hear a whispering in my ear, pull the trigger.
it is the devil on my shoulder, but i am bigger.
so i lay the gun down, started screaming, and having a emotional breakdown.
alone in this fucked up world, like i'm living in a ghosttown.
it's like i'm walking stairs, straight to my own nightmares.
the steps below are damaged, so they need repairs.
am i sick? Am i suffering from an unknown disease.
Cause i try to think straight, but the only thing i recognize is brainfreeze.
Pull me out this dirt, please take my hand.
Cause it feels like i'm drowning in quicksand.
This is a little dark writing. But i like various kind of writings. I try to place myself in somebody with this problems and try to sketch a feeling wich compares to people who feel it like i wrote it.
I hope you like it!
My next writing will be about a subject you guys choose. So please let me know in the comments what to rap about.
See you,
Marvin (Marlines)
Welcome to Steemit marlines! It is good to see you here. I used to listen rap when I was in middle and high school, as i got older my music taste shifted to rock/metal then blues/jazz. Recently with the influence of one of my friends who wrote rap song of his own @elysion , i tend to listen more rap. I am looking forward to see more content from you.
Hi Ruen, i like almost every music genre. But with rap you can put your toughts and feelings easier on a paper. And it is just a fun thing to do! Thanks for the support and i will drop a new one tonight or tomorrow. Thanks for the support!
Do you also record your writings as a rap song? I would love to listen one of yours.
I would love to do that, but i don't have the equipment to to that right now. Normally i write in dutch. So writing in english is a new step for me. But maybe when more people like it, i will consider to record a rap. A friend of mine @mrtitanium has a mic so maybe it is possible!
I like it marlines. :) keep writing