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RE: Infin(ite)ration: A short story—one chapter at a time. Chapter 4.
Hi @iamscifi. I liked the final sentence; it's very good. However, history as such lacks more science fiction elements. It is as if he were reading a normal story but with certain technological words. Not bad but for me it lacks more atmosphere. Kind regards
Thanks for your feedback. It's funny that you mention the lack of sci-fi depth, as I was thinking the same thing. Over the last few days, I added a decent amount of techxploration. Here a link the story in its entirety.
https://steemit.com/writing/@iamscifi/fuck-this-one-chapter-at-a-time-shit-here-s-the-whole-short-story-infin-ite-ration
You are very kind :) Thanks for the link