This is so well written!! You had me in suspense for sure, and I can tell you that is not an easy thing to do:) I know this is for a contest, but have you considered continuing your story in segments? I'd love to see where you take it! Thanks you again!
This one? No. I suppose I could do a longer rewrite if I wanted to though. This one was mostly wrapped up though.
I just wanted to know if somewhere in your head you knew what was out there that night? I totally understand the idea of suspense is in direct relation to how much is unknown, but was curious if it was known to you:)
Nope. This was mainly a freewrite with some minor editing.