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RE: Dark Sealing Sword — A Call from the Void
Another amazing story for the SSU! Its amazing you can improve on the quality of your previous works while making it even longer! The selection of pictures also helps a lot when trying to create a visual image of the characters and the scenery!
:) Tyvm. I'm really glad that people have taken the time to read it. It has had some overall great reviews. Improvement. Even I surprised myself on this one. I want to keep making great stuff!
The selection of pictures was a new one for me. I always try to create imagery with words alone, but I understand that not everyone has the same immersion as I do and that sometimes it can be hard to stay in tune with the reader's thoughts. While I think that a text should run independently from the images, I think that if the selection of images is appropriate, it won't affect it negatively and may even add some variety to the read (prevent it from being just a wall of text).
I hope more people will tell me their opinions. <3 I like honest reviews. It's the way I improve.