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RE: The pain in the cold - Short Story
I’d like to see some more in first person from the protagonist’s point of view.
I want to hear more of her inner monologue.
I’d like to see some more in first person from the protagonist’s point of view.
I want to hear more of her inner monologue.
Oh I gave you a smaller vote than I was going to, but this is ok.
I can give you an inner monologue.
"Fuck this shit it's cold, it's so freaking cold"
"I hate driving the same route all over again"
"Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck"
Lol I like it.